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Name: Sun Zhu 孫珠
Age: 18
Rank: Second Class Disciple
Allegiance: The Heavenly Demonic Cult
Appearance: A rather tall young lady, standing at 175 cm and 57 kg.
Personality: 
[hider=...]Of the corner of passersby's eyes is when one might catch Zhu in her best light. She's stolid in the way she carries herself, heavy-lidded & her chin high. She city hops, hardly ever stalled in one for more than a night or two. The seeming vagrant jingles in a crowd, small gems sometimes falling behind her to mark her trail, the only assurance of her being more than mirage. An illusive sight perhaps worthy of poem, but the mystery dies quickly over brief conversation. In truth, Zhu is only a youth with a penchant for decorating her person & a poor fate of being unable to raise her voice past that of a mouse.

Having spent the better half of her life within the infamous cult, its beliefs are her own & her mind is too narrow to change this, which sometimes comes at the discontent of those she's only just met. When her status as such a cultist becomes known, those who mean her genuine harm and those who simply find themselves at a loss for words become indistinguishable in her eyes; she'll find injustice where there is none & willfully rile herself up accordingly, without so much as the slightest regard for repercussions, legal or otherwise.

Zhu would love nothing more than to mind her own business & be spectator to the lively cities she visits, but her own pride keeps her. Zhu means no harm as she's a bit unworldly in her disposition; without her realizing, altruism & the well-being of those around her always finds a place to reside in her mind. Even in battle, her attacks are never so debilitating that her opponent can give up on recovery; though she's young, she's been in her fair share of engagements & her death toll remains zero even still. On a lighter note, she truly is genuine, although a bit brutish about it; if someone's mood can be improved & they'll allow her, trust her to try, though her solution might be odd.

Zhu relies on her actions to speak for her, as her weak voice is not able to & she hasn't bothered to train it. As a result, what often comes out of her mouth is simpleminded, sometimes inappropriately so, and often put too bluntly; her understanding of nuance & social graces is underdeveloped too. Only recently did she first breakthrough in her training, so her confidence is newly inflated. To her, it's not a matter of whether she'll come out of conflicts unscathed but, rather, how.[/hider]History:
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Up until her recent breakthrough in her martial training, Zhu had kept her head down & away from the public aspect of her clan, never really speaking out besides to those who had a part in raising her & focusing on her own growth above all else, as she tended to tunnel vision in her training, viewing anything else as a distraction. She was so withdrawn that it wasn't until recently that peers she'd studied with for so many years became aware of her existence; for a while, the few fellow cultists she's since become acquainted with thought she was a late transfer, despite having been born into the clan.

Her young mother was a devoted cultist, dedicating her life to her people. Her mother was only a minor member & without many friends, so when her mother died giving birth in the company of her only friend, a fellow cultist, the situation of the surviving child became precarious. This friend would mourn over the body of her friend, conflicted as she held the only breathing thing that remained of her. As this friend was only a girl then too, the friend saw only one thing when she gazed upon this child: her dearest's friend's murderer. Out of obligation to Zhu's mother, the friend set aside her training to raise the baby, but only to the day that Zhu's gait didn't totter. When Zhu could barely pour tea without spilling, her guardian effectively walked out of her life & put her to work as servant within the The Heavenly Demonic Cult under the pretense of socializing the little girl.

It wasn't until she fostered an interest in cultivating her body did she see her guardian again. By this time, Zhu had spent her entire childhood a servant, within a demonic cult no less. One fateful week, Zhu stole a moment away from her duties to informally apply in front of one of the most important-seeming elders she knew at the time. When she could, she'd sneak off to listen to the elder's teachings & watch in awe as he led his disciples in practices. Thinking back now, Zhu's rejection was understandable but hindsight couldn't help her then. The frustration of having been surrendered to such a fate, doomed to watch others cultivate themselves while she could only wait on them, pushed her over the edge. Barely a teen at time, she committed to running away, as the worst thing her young mind could fathom.

It must've been only a week that she was on her own, but her form was worn as though it'd been a year. In her attempt to cultivate, the process backfired severely as a result of her lack of instruction. Most of that week she spent trying to recover, but her best efforts only made her condition worse.
As though a higher power were looking over the girl, rescue came in the form of a familiarly disgruntled woman, drenched from a spring shower that fell upon the mountain the last day of that miserable week. The memory of watching this figure drudge up to little Zhu, hair stuck to the figure's face, was traumatic enough to instill within Zhu a fear of ghosts. 

With a strike & a scolding, Zhu returned home with the woman who once abandoned her long ago; she didn't forget. Zhu was in no shape to return to her old duties as a maidservant, so the woman begrudgingly took it upon herself to teach the little girl how to repair her body. Her guardian's teachings would stagnant as her condition improved, so Zhu would take it upon herself to get into another scrap & compel her guardian to further develop her in order to repair herself. As her guardian's teachings progressed to the point of redundancy, Zhu was formally introduced to the cult as an aspiring disciple & reluctantly taken in as a result of the guardian's credence. With this began her journey under a formal master & has now led her to where she is now.

It was only recently that Zhu made her first major breakthrough in the way of her cultivation. With this newfound strength & freedom from being a young adult, she's now taken to using it to enact her personal means of justice. Though she dared not admit it at the time, she truly hated her brief time as a servant as it showed her the petty side of men; she'd be called for the most menial things & expected to carry out the task with a smile. When she walked through cities, it was no different; servants waited on petty men without shame & it angered her to see. As a means to enact personal amends, she would rob these nobles at night & spend it on the poor or working in the following afternoon. What was left over, she would spend on herself, buying herself little jewels to embed into her clothes.
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Body Enhancements: 
Qinggong Expert - Zhu is exceptionally light & nimble compared to her peers. Her skill in manipulating & controlling her body to scale buildings or evade obstacles are near prodigious. She definitely has an affinity for acrobatics.

Hand-to-hand Combat - Zhu's most developed method of fighting. Without the use of qi, her style is focused on redirecting her opponent's weapon or strength. 

Dual Blade Combat - Lesser developed, but still effective.

Equipment:
— these hands
— Cheap jewel-embedded clothing
— Dual blades

Cultivation Base:
Techniques:
Burning Body — Zhu can direct an abundance of qi to a given point in her body to create a surface similar to a burning stove for her target. This technique should be used sparingly, unless one has cultivated themselves to a point where they are able to withstand strong temperatures. In Zhu's case, though she's developed a tolerance through repeated use, burns are not uncommon. 

A lesser form of this skill can be used to keep warm. Developing this skill further, fire instead can be conjured, characteristic of the Heavenly Demon Cult. It'll be a while before Zhu gets to that point.

Debilitating Strike - Utilizes one's knowledge of the body's acupoints against an opponent to disrupt their meridians and obstruct their energy flow. Receiving a blow like this can numb one's limbs or even freeze their movements.

Reinforced Palm - Releasing a great amount of qi in one burst, Zhu's strikes can send an opponent flying or break rock at a given point of contact. As this technique expels energy, it should also be used sparingly.

Weaknesses:
— Doesn't heal well. Average recovery time is doubled for her, even with cultivation, as a result of a deviation early in life.
— Projection; struggles to handle ranged opponents without closing the distance.
— Low durability; very glass canon.
— Self-preservation; blindly puts herself into the fray of things if she believes enough in a cause.[/hider]