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[b]Name:[/b] Nil

[b]Age:[/b] 19-20

[b]Nationality:[/b] Danish

[b]Noble Arm Name & Appearance: Stang[/b]
A simple rigid staff that has a bright blue glow which produces a faint light, Nil can move Stang via telekinesis.

[b]Noble Arm Rank:[/b] C rank

[b]Noble Arm Type, Element, and Range:[/b] glowy hitty thing, Short/Medium Range

[b]Noble Arm Abilities:[/b]
Conjured Staffs, Stang can be create copies that are indistinguishable from the original, Nil can also control them telekinetically and launch them at huge speed, the copies can also be used a barrier, walked on or just to make some light.

Body Enhancement, fairly standard body enhancing ability that increases physical strength and durability, interestingly Nil can boost this ability during combat and it makes her glow blue, especially the hair, eyes and tearducts.

Demolition, when touching an object Nil can form small Stang copies inside the object slowly pulling it apart, while powerful this ability requires extreme focus and Nil can only use it when stationary and vulnerable, making it useless in combat, the larger and tougher the object the more time is needed.

[b]Misc Abilities:[/b]
Nil can fluently speak Danish but can barely speak other languages such as English, Thai and Filipino.
Nil can also eat many inedible materials without seemingly suffering from it, such as wrappers and paper.

[b]Personality:[/b]  Nil usually doesn't speak much but she can be direct and blunt, she usually seeks to be around people but doesn't do much when in company.

        [b]*Likes:[/b] food, people, smashing stuff

        [b]*Dislikes:[/b] too much noise, long conversations

        [b]Fears:[/b] Drowning (she can swim but she panics when in deep water)

[b]Bio:[/b]
Subject designated name: Nil
Subject birth name: N/A
Subject weight and height: 55kg / 170cm

Description:
Nil joined ASEAN in 13th of May 2015 the day prior meeting ASEAN operatives in Pattaya, Thailand.
Nil has been unable to answer most questions about her past to the point where her age and nationality can only be assumed, the more commonly agreed theory is that she is from Denmark, as danish is the only language she can speak fluently, and information about her was lost in the 2009 ransomware attack to the Danish government's databases where many citizen's personal data was erased.
Nil displays some lack of understanding of human interactions and common knowledge, she has been a slow learner with things like learning a new language, monetary value and proper eating, despite this Nil seeks to be around other people and is uncomfortable when left alone for a long period of time.
Medical scans have shown that Nil is human and the lines on her body are likely related to her Noble Arm and not some biological condition, this is exemplified when she uses her Noble Arm and the lines on her body begin to emit a stronger glow.
In the last few years Nil has supported various field operations and displayed a level of obedience and calmness during tense situations.
Nil was sent in Lingayen shortly after the fighting began.

[b]*Current Goal:[/b] Being alive, eating

[b]Military or Civilian Rank:[/b] Operative Support Unit

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