[@GirlOnMarz] I love her! She's gonna be a great addition to the roster [s]and to D.A. Cosplayers, I see![/s].. I'm just not entirely sold on her FC, hun. She looks to be a bit too old to be playing the role of a high schooler.. :/ Is there any other younger face claims you might be able to fit into the character, you think..? Everything else looks good with her, though. <3 [@Squashedquatch] Hello love! So, a few things I gotta point out in your CS here. 1. Costa Mesa is a bit far from where the school is.. especially if he is riding his bicycle to school every day. It's about a good hour-ish drive, if there's no traffic. I could give you a list of cities that are around Long Beach that aren't directly in the same city as the school. 2. I know who's CS you copy/pasted for your CS outline just by this one x) The picture you have for Garfield is of a lab puppy, so you might wanna go back in there and fix that, my love. 3. "He likes to stickfight and is liable to randomly attack trees at a moment's notice" ...nothing wrong there. I just laughed aloud at this. I love it xD 4. In his bio it says his son is going into his last year of college, but this is actually high school. :) Unless perhaps I am reading that wrong, and you're not talking about Nick..? Which, in all honesty, could very well be the case lol 5. "Cooks himself lunch on busy days" ...are you meaning at home on the weekends..? Or, like, cooking himself food in the morning (or the night before) for him to take for lunch at school? I'm just curious, and just wanted a bit of further explanation. I hope I don't come off as rude with that.