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[@Zeroth]: Still accepting, but let me first break the form's biggest issues down.

[list][*]Personality. I personally feel like your system, set up as it is, has the potential to leave people more confused than if you had simply attempted to write something up piecemeal. The fact that not just I, but other people would have to go and read multiple separate documents over, then match things 1:1 in each to figure out a summary seems unnecessarily complex. Of course, this could just as well be a personal problem, but I still feel that this would be better served with a normal summary.
[*]Reason to hire. Just because the character wants into the company doesn't mean he has the sufficient qualifications to get in. He brings nothing to the table the way he is now; no physical capabilities, no contract, and no tangible skills OUTSIDE of those that might have made him a reasonable hire beyond his connections.
Which, honestly speaking, would be better put to use joining his father's company because of nepotism instead of chasing skirts. Leads me to my next point, though.
[*]Motivation. Joining a company to find a hookup is a red flag, and I have no idea how you bullshit an interview with that as a primary motivation. Just staying.[/list]

Oh, and Grudges are the primary enemy in context of the RP, not Youkai. Well, for starters, at least. That's all I have to say on the matter for right now. And yeah, magic tied to weapon/contract presence.
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Understood, thanks! I've reworked the personality section into a more in-depth write up that will hopefully be better. Also corrected the mixup with Grudges. I started to adjust/swap his skills/abilities as well, given that I started to feel like "abilities" should be things he developed naturally and skills should be actual things he learned how to do and practice, but that's kinda WIP given my next bit.

Regarding the reason to hire and his motivation, I want to make some changes and add on a bit that'll provide more clarity in his History, but I'm stuck in a few places. He IS a degenerate, but he's also suffering from ennui and self-sabotage in what I'm hoping will be an exploratory twist of the usual coming-of-age kind of character. Basically I wanted to hit that combination of "comic relief" and "oh wait this character's actually starting to get hype." So his motivation being to try and land a hot monstergirl was meant to be more of a "that's the part he'll actually TELL you," statement. Deep down, he actually does have solid ideals of virtue but he hasn't found any way that feels meaningful (to him, personally) to embody them. It WOULD be more rational for him to just join his father's company, or go to college for something generic, or be a salary-man. But his inner Chuunibyou can't accept that. He IS a coward, and yet the idea of becoming a cool demon magic person appeals to him because it presents a way to grow past that cowardice.

I was hoping that, with Takeda's company just getting off the ground, and with the career of Attuned sounding like a daily life-or-death struggle, that just the fact Seiji wants to sign up of his own free will to fight a bunch of soul-eating magical bullshit would be reason to take him on if only in the capacity of like, an intern or trainee at first who has to get a weapon/form a contract before he can do any actual field missions. If that wouldn't work, then that's probably where I'm stuck the most, unless other Youkai submissions are made and another player wants to partner up.

Attuned Weapons are described in the initial write-up in a way that makes me think they're very "one for life" kind of things--are there no "mass produced trash" variants for like, civil self defense or just-starting-out Attuned? Would there be any way that someone who's not already Attuned might find out "hey you have a lot of spiritual energy, you'd be super good at this life-threatening career?"

And, are there any skills that would make him valuable to a Grudge Hunter Company besides outright combat ability? Something like being tech savvy, having a Pokedex knowledge of Youkai, etc?