Aight, review time.

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[@Duthguy] I like this guy. He's cool.

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That's all the review you get. Go ahead and add Zerry into the Character tab.
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[@Squashedquatch] Sorry I didn't get back to you as fast as I said I would. I've only just [i]now[/i] had the chance to take a proper look at everyone's apps.

I appreciate that you fixed what I told you to, truly. That's exactly why I'm mad at myself for not seeing this earlier.

[quote=@Squashedquatch]Ok so he was born. (I would have loved to gone into deeper detail about why but it doesn't matter because that part doesn't add anything to his personality or do anything related to the story, so I'm skipping the filler)[/quote]

I... honestly don't know what I can tell you about this statement in particular, except that it's cursed. For the future, you really [i]should[/i] just throw in bits and pieces of detail into your apps anyway, even if you don't believe it to be relevant to what a GM asks of you, or whatever else. For the moment though, I don't care whether or not you replace the quoted statement with [i]anything[/i]; I'd rather just not have to see that it's still there, for my sanity's sake.

I feel as though there's a continuity issue here too, within the bio itself. The Honorstar Garrison Raid was an extremely chaotic battle; realistically speaking, everyone would be too busy fighting for their own lives to pay much attention to one lone guy's mad sniping. What you [i]could[/i] do is have your guy had sniped off who he could in the fight, bailed upon spotting the reinforcements and later chanced upon the other survivors as he entered the tavern, using [i]that[/i] opportunity to offer his help instead. That should fix the continuity issue I'm getting here, hopefully without interfering with what you wanted.
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[@ColouredCyan] You certainly have the interesting character in the making. If not for the few things here and there, I'd be more than happy to accept it.

Re-Appropriator is not a crew role that I had thought of; I'd just assumed that the cat burglar aspect was something Nami did on the side, prior to officially joining the Straw Hats. Unfortunately, Re-Appropriator is also not a crew role that's on the list. I'll need a moment to consider how such a role would actually help the Sea Reaver Pirates overall, niche applications aside.

Judging from what you've written for the field itself, I'd class Poppy's combat role as a Corsair. They're more focused on quick-draws and rapid shooting than lining up their shots. You can always transfer what you've written in the Combat Role field to the Fighting Style field on the off-chance you wanna save it, but I'll leave that up to you.
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That's all for now. I'll establish a due date for apps to be completed when I've finished setting things up.