[quote=@AdmrlStalfos19] Aight, review time. [hr] [@Duthguy] I like this guy. He's cool. ... That's all the review you get. Go ahead and add Zerry into the Character tab. [hr] [@Squashedquatch] Sorry I didn't get back to you as fast as I said I would. I've only just [i]now[/i] had the chance to take a proper look at everyone's apps. I appreciate that you fixed what I told you to, truly. That's exactly why I'm mad at myself for not seeing this earlier. I... honestly don't know what I can tell you about this statement in particular, except that it's cursed. For the future, you really [i]should[/i] just throw in bits and pieces of detail into your apps anyway, even if you don't believe it to be relevant to what a GM asks of you, or whatever else. For the moment though, I don't care whether or not you replace the quoted statement with [i]anything[/i]; I'd rather just not have to see that it's still there, for my sanity's sake. I feel as though there's a continuity issue here too, within the bio itself. The Honorstar Garrison Raid was an extremely chaotic battle; realistically speaking, everyone would be too busy fighting for their own lives to pay much attention to one lone guy's mad sniping. What you [i]could[/i] do is have your guy had sniped off who he could in the fight, bailed upon spotting the reinforcements and later chanced upon the other survivors as he entered the tavern, using [i]that[/i] opportunity to offer his help instead. That should fix the continuity issue I'm getting here, hopefully without interfering with what you wanted. [hr] [@ColouredCyan] You certainly have the interesting character in the making. If not for the few things here and there, I'd be more than happy to accept it. Re-Appropriator is not a crew role that I had thought of; I'd just assumed that the cat burglar aspect was something Nami did on the side, prior to officially joining the Straw Hats. Unfortunately, Re-Appropriator is also not a crew role that's on the list. I'll need a moment to consider how such a role would actually help the Sea Reaver Pirates overall, niche applications aside. Judging from what you've written for the field itself, I'd class Poppy's combat role as a Corsair. They're more focused on quick-draws and rapid shooting than lining up their shots. You can always transfer what you've written in the Combat Role field to the Fighting Style field on the off-chance you wanna save it, but I'll leave that up to you. [hr] That's all for now. I'll establish a due date for apps to be completed when I've finished setting things up. [/quote] When did I say he had participated?