[@Pagemaster]

If you could fill out a bit more about Abd's Motivation that'd be fantastic. It's meant to give a peek into what should drive him as a person overall. If it helps, you can think of it as a mash-up of a personality/history section. 

Otherwise it looks like a good start to me! If accepted I'll have a little chat with you about how his danger sense works and what sort of goods overall Abd may be carrying.