[quote=@Squashedquatch] Hm, ok. I guess the backstory is just: He was about to kill the Elden Beast and instead a great beam of light took him away [/quote] I take it he came from across the sea to the Lands Between to heed the call of long-lost grace? What path did he take to reach the Elden Throne? Which Shardbearers did he fell? What alliances did he make, who did he serve, and what beliefs did he hold? Did he seek to take the throne, never once straying from the path set before him by the Two Fingers? Did he become a Recusant of Volcano Manor? Did he follow in the footsteps of the Graven Witch, only to turn against her and side with Castellan Jerran once he realized the foulness of her misdeeds, yet be haunted by the loss of what could have been if only he kept his eyes to the stars? There's plenty of room to use the backstory to expand upon your character's character within the established setting of Elden Ring. I would ask that you differentiate the Backstory and Personality sections, as well.