[quote=@Lugubrious]
I think what you've got would actually work fine if you made the location the Ruins instead of the Barge, as in he's 'coming to' in the flowerbed that broke everyone's fall through the Chasm as the fight with the monsters concluded, having been stunned by the fall himself
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This is what I'll be working off anyway, otherwise things get all squiggly time wise