[quote=@Balthazar007] I like your character a lot, and your writing is easy to read. There are only a few things that need tweaked. His race would be "Beastfolk: Highland Cow", and his faction would be "Giant Foot Tribe: Bighorn". I'm going to say his species, on average, lives to be about 125 years old. This explains why he would look young in human form despite being in his late teens. That being said, can you simply put his age down as a number? (E.g. "17") Also you didn't put any Key Items, which you don't need. However, I could imagine that traveler could have given him a weapon, staff, amulet, or something else if you would like, and it can be a magic item of some sort. I leave that up to you. Finally, how long would you say it's been since he left Numgam? This will help me with deciding his starting coins. [/quote] He's basically fresh off the boat right now, no money to speak of (probably).