[@Raineh Daze]: Accepted.

[@ImaginedBird67]: The name isn't a real Japanese name or a real name in another other language.

That description is completely inadequate and you haven't given a picture to supplement. How is anyone supposed to get a good sense of how your character looks?

You removed her personality section.

Was she named for skills she would possess in the future? That explanation of her name doesn't make any sense.

Her archetype isn't valid and she doesn't have a concept. They're modeled on actual stories, mythological tales, sourced from things like that. See the examples I gave in the OP.

Her abilities are sparse and pretty much useless as a magical girl. In fact, I really don't see anything in this CS that points to her being a magical girl at all. Nothing is mentioned in backstory.

I'm sorry but I can't accept this, it's below the level of quality intended for this RP. Please look at the other bios already posted to get an idea of what I'm looking for.