[@Neianna86] You will need to make some changes to your characters. They are very well thought out and not much about the actual information you provided was "wrong", but I'm going to ask you to move some things around for clarity's sake. First, I'd like you to put each character sheet into its own hider, like [@Spin The Wheel] did with his character sheet. This wasn't stated as a requirement, but I really like how clean it keeps the "Characters" tab. Also, it's better if you title your hiders, to clearly define what is inside them, instead of just leaving it as "My Hider". Second, very small mistake, it's [b]Soaring Wing Tribe[/b], not Soaring Wind Tribe. (Oh geez, I felt like Hermione Granger writing that.) Third, it seems both your characters have a primary weapon ([i]a sword for Fantaghiro and a spear for Kazuha[/i]). Primary weapons should be listed as a key item, not within inventory. Next, you seem to be confusing the purpose of [b]"Current Status"[/b], and that is my fault for not clearly explaining it. A character can only be "Active" or "Inactive", and this actually refers to whether or not you are currently posting as that character. So for Kazuha, if you don't actually plan on posting his actions, if he is simply the motivation for Fantaghiro, then change his status to "Inactive". If you do plan on posting his activities, even if you don't give away his location, then change his status to "Active". After that, simply say something like '[i]Traveling in secret.[/i]' For "Current Location" for Kazuha, delete the words "Map Coordinates", and simply put "Unknown", if you want to keep his location a secret for now. Then, in both character's inventory, where you're talking about how much money they have, remove that information. Simply change this to [b]"Coins:"[/b] followed by an amount. For both characters, considering they come from noble blood, but also, since they are not humans, they can start with anywhere between 50,000 and 150,000 coins. Finally, all the information about "The 5 Forbidden Isles" should be put into it's own hider, separate from both characters. I love what you've done here, helping with the world building. I think it deserves to be highlighted separately from both characters, especially since it applies to them both and could be referenced by other players. Now, I know all this looks like a lot, and perhaps you are writing all this on your phone, which makes formatting very difficult. If this is the case, I can fix most of this for you, and PM it directly to you, so that you can then copy and paste it. Let me know! Thank you!