[quote=@PaulHaynek]
[@Enkryption]

Sorry for modifying your post, but I felt it would be strange for Takeshi to have just watched.

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Unless I read wrong, the fact that Takeshi caught, effectively, Lady Dimitrescu, without breaking his back, is the only part of that I could take issue with.

And, that's solely because it's hilarious to imagine.

Beyond that, s'all good. Iff'n ya ever wanna add or change something, you can always DM me. I usually won't have an issue, if it's nothing I feel is scene breaking or detracts from the core of the post.