[quote=@Martian]


[@ImaginedBird67]
There’s a couple things I would like you to expand on. For the appearance section, I would suggest just using an image. The history section needs a lot of fleshing out, as it is currently two sentences and not the minimum two paragraphs. I would suggest expanding on Kate’s origins, her reaction to the Hydra reveal and then how she joined the Avengers. Also I would like you to expand on the sample story line section. If you could make those changes, I’ll look over your character sheet again.
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Thank you for the response. The history section was me misreading what was required, I shall get to this immediately. But question what do you mean by expanding the story line section?  

Also, the pictures don't seem to work for some reason.

@Martian