It's okay, Syblyx. You're just anxious to kick the game off with a bang, which gives me a warm, fuzzy feeling. A few edits, and you'll be right as rain. :)

Just a little reminder to the general therad: I would like to see everyone's first post in no more than ten days. I am (as always) short on time before I have to be at work, so I will just say take your time writing and please do PM me or post here with any questions or comments! Thanks guys!