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[@MagusDream] [s]Gods, what a job. Still, making nice progress. ;) [/s] DONE! 
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Oh, I read it and I found the prospect of having a "humanified" orc walking around, hating the fact that he doesn't look as he did before and hating on Earth just excellent! I really think he'll work fine!

I'd just like for his abilities to be a little more... explained. I know that he's all muscle and brute strength, but I think there's more to an orc than just that so a little more flash would be cool. It's also important to tell that he didn't lose his strength as an orc when arriving on Earth. He's still hella stronger and can send people away with a flick, even if his lifestyle changed from one world to the other.

Oh, and you can just put the two parts you did together in one single CS, if you'd like. But other than the things above, I've no further complaints, and I'm happy to accept Goram to the RP.