[quote=@Mintz]
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This looks promising, but let's touch base on a few things; firstly, backstory. The main thing that strikes me as odd is how, er....Emotional his spiders come off as? That was my best way of describing it, but my point being this. End of the day, they're still spiders, so beyond being piloted by his intents (which is what some of this could be viewed as, but it's put forth in a kinda odd way), they're still very simplistic creatures. As for his power, the ability-copying needs to last for a far shorter frame; I'd say at most is perhaps 10 minutes, to prevent him from simply having access to a massive collection of powers of his choosing that can last him for potentially a whole hour lol. Oh, and also, how exactly do these 'power transfusions' work when it comes to giving him multiple Parahuman abilities at once, or when (theoretically, given this is not dismissed in the Power section itself) granted to other Parahumans? Does it simply not work? Or does he gain those multiple powers, perhaps at some cost, like the duration, potency, or control of said abilities? Some things to think on that I'd like to see handled before I fully accept him, but overall, it's lookin' good. :)
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Ah. Uh, so I most definitely appreciate the feedback, those are all legitimate concerns to have and I agree they're in need of fixing when brought to light like that. That said, some stuff has changed since I last updated the sheet. I honestly thought this rp was dead, so Webber's been submitted to a different rp. Due to a personal rule about one rp per character - last time I didn't follow it, I got some stuff mixed up - I'll need to withdraw his app and possibly start over on a new character. Given some other changes in my life circumstances, I'm not certain how plausible this will be. I'll try, but certainly don't wait on my behalf is all I'm saying.