[@The World]: Actually, on second review of your bio, I'm a little concerned the backstory trends a bit too over-the-top? Multiple street gangs(and I'll admit the names are a bit on the nose) that kill multiple people and somehow escape justice the entire time is a bit much.

I'd try focusing in on a single tragic event and how its impact twisted her life around it. I want emotional baggage and trauma is definitely not bad for the purposes of narrative and character development, but it feels a bit like a conga line here.