[@Blizz] no worries, let me know if you ever want back in and we'll see what we can do for it!

[@Martian]
Alright, main thing is that the personality section isn't fully filled out. Underneath relationship status there is a space where you more of elaborate on the character's personality.

Skills wise there is a better way to word some of the ones you have...
[list][*]General Farming Skills -> Farming
[*]Higher level player of Magic -> Magic the Gathering Card Game (not super specific but you don't need to mention you are a high level player in it, we have someone who literally has Dungeons and Dragons Mechanics as a skill too so fit in that boat there)
[*]Computer Sciences in General -> The in general part isn't actually needed
[*]Decent Aim when firing gem shards -> Gem Shard Projectiles[/list]

This is mainly to make it a bit easier if you ever need to ask for rolls or use the skills and such, since it is okay to have the skills broad in general, since it also makes it easier to potentially find skills for most scenarios and the wording helps a bit to ensure that everything falls into those specific categories for when you ask to use the skill to help boost your rolls.

Now, the one other skill is the Languages one where you mention English and Filipino
It is not necessary to list skills your character automatically would know, as in they grew up with it.
For instance my character Marygold, she's from Germany and was raised in a household that spoke both German and English, so she automatically has those and it isn't necessary to name them off. However later on she did gain the skill of being able to speak French, so she did end up needing the skill added to her CS if that makes sense? And that is the only "language" skill that she actually has since it was something that she ended up getting later.