[@Nallore] let me know when you've made these edits and I'll confirm it looks good Diana - [list][*]Age is off - she would be 16 at the start of the RP, and have her 17th birthday coming up in a month or so [*]Coursework needs to go in the correct spot of the CS - should be in between Combat Skills and Medical Issues/Injuries [*]Under family, her brother's surname is actually Novikov (Novikova is the feminine surname, he takes the masculine one) [*]Character quote?[/list] Mads - [list][*]Age is off - she would be 15 at the start of the RP, going on 16 that November. [*]Does Mads not carry a backpack or a purse with her? It's fine if she doesn't, just odd that she shows up w/ nothing to class lol [*]In the history, you don't really answer how she discovered her powers? Like, you give the age and how it's normal in the family, but don't really describe it beyond that [*]Grimoire looks good to me! [/list] [@Trainerblue192] let me know when you've made these edits and I'll confirm it looks good Dorian - [list][*]Missing pronouns - should be listed between Birth Place & Gender [*]I think knowing all 4 of those languages is a lot, so I'd like for you to remove one - he can always learn a new language in the future. Maybe remove Sanskrit and change the 3 years of Sanskrit skill to say 'basic Sanskrit' - or you could do something similar with Latin. Or change the Korean to be a skill for purely conversational Korean? Idk. But something lol. [*]Can you add descriptions on what Tag You're It and Peek A Boo mean? [*]Anything in his backpack? [*]The magic sword - what does it... do? lol [*]Maybe give him more stuff for Twitch Streaming equipment wise? You've got tons of room to put things in his dorm room! [*]Theme song was switched over to Favorite Song, so if that's the same then just replace the label - if not, what's his favorite song?[/list] [@Achronum] Danny - these are basically all suggestions / minor things, so once you make any edits, go ahead and move him over! [list][*]This doesn't even really need an edit, but basically bc of his birthday, for him to be the same grade as Dorian it means that Casper and James waited a little longer to put him into school (i.e., his July birthday meant he could've been a grade above Dorian, making him a senior, but it's not unusual for parents to decide to have their July kiddo get an extra year at home before starting to help them be ready / more mature). And like, it makes sense to me that James and Casper would do that lol. [*]Could you put a description of Tag You're It next to the skill? [*]Has he been diagnosed with ADHD? If so, does he have ADHD meds on him / in his dorm? [*]No need to make an edit here, but maybe he has some kitchen supplies in his dorm room - like an illegal toaster oven or something :P [/list]