[quote=@Dark Cloud] [@Lugubrious] here's my next character per your review boss. [hider=Comic Sans] [center][img]https://fontmeme.com/permalink/230105/e90b8e20d0ba623ec14b441701183310.png[/img][/center] [center][b]Game Origin:[/b] [i]Undertale[/i][/center] [hr] [center][img]https://i.redd.it/3w8jn83ekb511.png[/img][/center] [center][i]"[color=4683c6]it's a beautiful day outside...[/color]"[/i][/center] [center][color=FFFFFF][b]- Sans[/b][/color][/center] [hr] [b]Personality:[/b] Sans is lazy, prone to sleeping on the job and taking frequent breaks. This laziness is a combination of fatalism and apathy, due to the knowledge that the world could simply reset. Conversely, he often suggested that the knowledge could be "a poor excuse for being lazy." Although Sans couldn't be motivated to get a single thing done, he finds ways to get the work done by someone else like the fallen child. He enjoys being mischievous, primarily towards those he's on good terms with like his brother Papyrus. San's antics range from an assortment of illogical, juvenile and slightly inconvenient pranks. His list of tomfoolery vary from using whoopee cushions to eye paint on telescopes, but Sans isn't above utilizing his magic for practical jokes either. But the self-proclaimed 'comic' is quite fond of making the occasional low-brow pun, but he seems to enjoy making others laugh. Sans is almost apathetic about his own life at times, however he has shown to be considerate to those he cares for like his brother and the other monsters who frequented Grilby's all of which seem to admire the skeleton in a way or at least regard him in a positive light. Despite being friendly with the other monsters of the underground Sans hates making promises, due to the fact that even if he kept a promise it wouldn't matter at the end of the day. Although the skeleton will play the part of an easygoing slacker, Sans is fairly observant and can easily read a persons expression. Most times he is an agreeable fellow, yet he can become eerily serious to emphasise a subject when least expected. [b]Background:[/b] Nobody in Snowdin can really recall when exactly the two skeletons took up residence in their cozy little town, some say they simply showed up one day and asserted themselves in the area but the story goes the skeletal siblings made themselves quite a kerfuffle at least the taller of the pair did. Meanwhile his brother tried his best to make friends with the people of Snowdin, Sans simply spent most his days frequenting Grilby's much to his eccentric brothers chagrin. As far as he was concerned, Sans didn't take his sentry duties seriously though Papyrus was unaware that his brother had begrudgingly made a promise to someone. Despite wanting the best for his brother he had no interest in capturing any human, were it up to him he'd have simply killed any unlucky enough to pass by but he made a promise not to. So he watched and judged the fallen child, passively of course. [b]Specialty:[/b] [i]Glass Cannon[/i] [b]Level:[/b] 1 [b]Experience:[/b] [color=gray][i]0/10 EXP[/i][/color] [b]Powers:[/b] [list] [*] [b]Teleportation Magic:[/b] [i]Due to the somewhat spacial or gravitational nature of Sans' magic, he is able to use teleportation magic on himself, his opponents and his attacks to a certain degree. He normally uses this as a "shortcut" to certain locations he visits but in battle he uses this power to dodge enemy attacks, making him incredibly hard to hit as well as making it difficult for an enemy to avoid his attacks. He can't teleport anywhere unless he is familiar with the destination or has a line of sight with wherever he plans to teleport to.[/i] [sup][color=gray](Starting Power)[/color] [/sup][sup][color=gray]Power Level:[/color] 1[/sup] [/list] [b]Strengths:[/b] [list] [*] [b]Karmic Retribution [KR]:[/b] [i]Sans' attacks have an affect on enemies who have done things that are considered evil, such as mercilessly killing innocent people or causing malicious harm to others, etc. When damaged an enemy will be affected by [KR] like they would if they were being effected by poisoning, each time their hit it accumulates if not healed right away.[/i] [*] [b]Enhanced Speed:[/b] [i]When bothered to, Sans is capable of moving at speeds fast enough to outpace the fastest vehicles. Moving at such speeds isn't as harmful to him as it would a regular person, although he doesn't use his enhanced speed to run instead to dodge incoming attacks along with his teleportation magic. Because of this at times his movements are almost impercieveable, making it hard to anticipate his actions.[/i] [*] [b]Awareness:[/b] [i]While seemingly ignorant, Sans is in fact incredibly aware of his surroundings and can usually anticipate the actions of those around him. He can usually interpret and predict an enemies attack and react to it, and avoid the attack if there is room to dodge or teleport out of the way even at a dead angle. Sans also can read a persons expressions pretty well too.[/i] [/list] [b]Weaknesses:[/b] [hider=] [list] [*] [b]Lazybones:[/b] [i]Despite his extraordinary capabilities, Sans can't be bothered to use them in most situations unless absolutely necessary. He doesn't like putting in the effort and has even fallen asleep during battle. Although he does use his abilities to do less extraordinary things like travel without needing to move his legs or commit his usual childish pranks. In a fight if Sans uses his abilities repeatedly he will grow tired and may even fall asleep, though he has been known to dodge attacks in his slumber.[/i] [*] [b]Weak Stats:[/b] [i]While incredibly difficult to beat due to his enhanced speed, difficult to anticipate attacks and skill with teleportation magic, Sans has the lowest strength and defense of any monster in the Underground. Each of his attacks do the least amount of damage, though [KR] and the speed of his attacks remedy this. And one good hit can put him in relative danger, as he isn't as robust as others which is why he uses his abilities to avoid being hit.[/i] [/list] [/hider] [b]Spirits:[/b] [list] [*] [b]N/A[/b] [/list] [b]Inventory:[/b] [i]A blue parka, white shirt, black gym shorts, and a pair of slippers.[/i] [/hider] [/quote] I have a couple notes on this. The first is that you need to have your first character at level three before you bring in a second. The second is that I'd like you to demonstrate posting consistently and accurately for a while with one character before taking on two. The third, ignoring the first two, is that Sans is a difficult character to play in this manner. Between teleportation and superspeed it's almost impossible to actually fight him, all but negating his 'low stats' through absurd evasion and insane DPS. He even got strengths included in his weaknesses, like being able to dodge while asleep. The only limiting factor to this is him being lazy, but this is a voluntary act on the part of you the player, so your character is very overpowered unless you decide for him not to be. And if he doesn't do any particular thing, it isn't because he couldn't, but because he chose not to. Would you really just let him let his allies get hurt, or an enemy accomplish an important objective? That's be negligence, callousness, or worse. Would he, a notorious layabout, really depart on a cross-continental journey in the first place? He's a character of extremes dictated by whim and not, in my eyes, suitable as a PC. [quote=@Isaac] Hello! I'm back! Is my character still in the rp? [/quote] No. You ghosted us without warning or anything, so I wrote him off. If you want to rejoin, you'll need to start fresh.