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[@Spin The Wheel]

I like this CS!  The only change I would like to see is removing the mentions of the hunters!  As it stands, the hunters stopped the hunts over a century ago and thus they would not be active again quite yet :)  Once you fix that and add in a physical description of your character you will be good to move that over to the CS tab!
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Done, and done. Here are the changed portions for convenience's sake:

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[b]Appearance:[/b] Short and scrawny, Elio looks a bit younger than his real age. His messy brown curls and faded clothes speak to his unfortunate circumstances, but his clear blue eyes shine with bright defiance. He doesn't have many sets of clothes in his beaten backpack, so his outfit coordination is sloppy at best. But he makes do with what he has.

On seeing this, Elio's parents split from him, directing him to a certain place, supposedly a safehouse with some instructions. They said it would help him, and that splitting up would be safer. And before he could respond, they left. He journeyed to the safehouse, jumping at shadows all the while - there were too many things he didn't know. Somehow, a letter had arrived ahead of him, addressed to Elio by name. He found it very suspicious, but what choice did he have? He was on his own now.
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