[@Sho Minazuki]

Alright. Everything in order, with a preface that a lot of the CS comes off as vague, as for what's desired in the actual space without clear-cut examples. But, that's a broad criticism, so on to the specifics.

[hider=Responses]1: I've addressed the issue with the Main Weapon and Subweapon in the preface, but I'll revisit it for a moment, to simply state that it's placeholder text until I actually knew what you wanted in that spot.

Now that I know you want very specific things, and not a broad category, I can more specifically say: Main Weapon: Knuckle Dusters, Subweapon: Railgun (Shotgun).

2: Second verse, same as the first, but let's be specific. There's no distinction here of what I'm to presume is her "fighting style" and what is a "boon" of it. John's a boxer, first and foremost, who is versed in orthodox and southpaw boxing styles, so she's ambidextrous. So, I'm working now, under the assumption you are asking for, specifically: Fighting Style: Traditional Boxing, Boon: Ambidextrous.

To address the gun, what fighting style exists for a shotgun? The best I could think of is: Fighting Style: Riot Control, Boon: Quickdraw. If you have suggestions here, I am open to them. This is a pretty unusual ask for a character, so, admittedly, I'm stumped.

3: Kirin's Eyes is pre-balanced by the fact that it's sensory overload is so immense that John wears glasses with a prescription strong enough that it's damaging her eyesight, because she would be dozens to hundreds of people's lives and their next ten seconds. Throw her into a crowd, knock off her glasses, and her forced to close her eyes or go insane from sensory overload.

Your suggestion is essentially the Sharingan, and that's 100% fine by me as a Naruto fan, so I'll revise with that. Just wanted to point out that it was default balanced.

4: Ionizing Purity is specific poison resistance, geared towards her personal vices. John doesn't go about drinking general poisons on a nightly basis, but I could see her learning to make it into a general poison resistance in future events. So, thanks for the suggestion, I like it.

5: To the point of the Masterless Visions, I suppose spoilers are due, in which the Alighieri Coven Patriarch and Matriarchs performs a Ritual of Reincarnation, which summons a soul from rhe Circle of Hell represented by the birth mother's namesake, and draws that soul back to the unborn child at the moment of birth to attempt to reawaken the Vision by generating a Destiny of overcoming Death's Embrace.

Hence, why the children are born of The Seven Deadly Sins, sired the Sin of Pride, and John is the 1,856 child, as the success rate is influence, but still as unguaranteed as any. Setting John to receive a Vision at any moment in her life doesn't overtly change anything, but it's more interesting that her Vision is with her from birth, due to reawakening to its Allogene reborn.[/hider]
Alright. With all that addressed neatly and fairly, I think, I'll make the revisions and adjustments that are needed after I get off work.

And, thanks for a rather prompt reply and critiques.