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Astonishing! For a dude who isn't a 'fantasy guy,' you write killer fantasy characters. If I understand Mamjir right, and I write in broad strokes here, he is an anomalous field mouse operating a mechanical construct via his dreams. And his goal is to wear the mech down so it won't go on a rampage and slaughter everyone around it. Please correct me if I got this wrong!

I have to say that I love the concept of this character, both the worldbuilding you sprinkled in there as well as the more humorous tones of Mamjir. The only real quarrel I have with the character is that he has been part of the crew for an indeterminate amount of time. Although I'm sure we can work something out, the premise of this story was that the characters would be new recruits just joining, or rookies just beginning their careers. But that's not to say it wouldn't work, but Mamjir might have to take on a sort of teaching role for the other new recruits in the beginning. If you are okay with this potential role as a player, then I see no problem with Mamjir :]!
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Thanks! Yeah, couldn't have said it better. I don't mind Mamjir being new to the crew, or taking up a memtoring role. I could just as easily mwke him a new joiner to the crew.