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Lovely cohesive backstory and I appreciate the amount of detail you added to her personality and relevant abilities! I advise you to take a second glance at the characters of the ship as Savva, much like Mamjir, will have been already recruited and have some type of relation to each of the crewmen. I see nothing wrong with this sheet, but out of curiosity, would you say Savva has some kind of long-term goal? From past experiences (mainly DnD), characters with an already-established goal are often easier to drive their story forward with. Extra points if it is a clear goal like Arzhang Deko's goal of becoming a lavish waiter, or Mamjir's goal of serving the duty set upon him.
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In the corner, a small stick stuck into the lantern's flame flares into life and is carefully withdrawn, then touched to the tobacco in the bowl of the pipe. The flame flares, illuminating Savva's face in the shadows for a moment as she draws the flame down to ignite the tobacco. The first draw is harsh, but the cherry flavor begins to come through. 

Her eyes water and she coughs, but takes another draw on the pipe. 

"So, that's tobacco..." she manages a little hoarsely, shaking her head as she exhales the smoke. 

"We met the MILOV in Kallokian. We left Little Rath in the middle of the night, riding all night long. Not a lot of places for an airship to tie up in Little Rath. I'm about to be embarrassed by the Mayor and his goons showing up after I've signed papers."

"Do you know what shade of green an embarrassed goblin becomes?" she pauses, sucking in the smoke, then exhaling. "Like slime you find in a swamp. And that's how I'm going to meet the crew, my face all dark that. Some of them might have even watched."

"My current goal is to get away," Savva nods, sucking the smoke into her lungs, then slowly exhales. "Long term goals I don't have, not yet anyway. But I've got dreams."

Leaning forward, she stares into your eyes. "I want people to look up to me. That's my dream. If I can make that happen, then I can set goals."