[quote=@Theyra]
<Snipped quote by Blizz>

After reading it there are some problems like you are going to have to explain how Darth Hadris managed to stay low and not be detected by the empire and by Darth Sidious. Along with how he came to be a Sith and a Darth at that, and start a Sith Academy without anyone knowing about it. I think a rouge Inquisitor would fit more.      


<Snipped quote by Regime Goon>

Being a New Republic deserter in the New Jedi Order will cause problems, mainly the relationship between the Order and the New Republic. You can say she left the New Republic after the Valdont. That and there being a legion of sith apprentices is very unlikely, so how about removing that bit?

<Snipped quote by Martian>

I am not sure that he would be that skilled with the force on his own and with no training to do stuff like that. Perhaps he was a cheater or would seem lucky because he was using the force without knowing it and after making some risky bets. His luck ran out and he owned bad people credits. So he fled and either managed to run into a jedi or was captured and was later saved by a jedi would be dealing with the criminal that imprisoned him?    


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I can change that, no problem. A rogue inquisitor who thought he was hot shit and bit off more than he could chew with the students. Him being a Sith Lord in particular isn’t important to the story, just that Hadris was a certified Bad Person mainly.