Hi everyone, back from my break. 

For Palestine (being the now previous player of it) all I have to say is that you probably want to include the Ethiopians coming in and helping during the recapturing of Jerusalem. That was a major event in the rebellion. An Ottoman ambush there was most likely going to destroy the rebels, but then Hassan came in and saved them, making him a hero to Palestine. From there on, it was planned that the rebels would stick with him for as long as he kept going through Ottoman territory. I'm not sure if that was kept, since I need to catch up still, but... That's all I have to say. 

That, and that I will miss Jelal.