[quote=@kitramos] [hider=Asuka Aki] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/66/0a/e5/660ae5b065b71182382d4de8b588de60.jpg[/img] [center][h1]Character Name/Header image[/h1] [h2][color=Purple]Asuka Aki[/color][/h2] [sub][color=white][i]Nicknames[/i][/color][/sub] [sub][color=pink]((Faceclaim: Nayun Kim)) [i][b]Character quote - who said it[/b][/i] "It is Never to late to be who you might of been" - George Elliot "Don't be afraid to fail, and learn form it, and try again. Sometimes Failing Fast and often is the best way to find what does work" - James Portnow [/color][/sub][/center] Name: [indent][color=Purple]Asuka Aki.[/color][/indent] [color=white]Age & Grade: Senior 18[/color] [indent]Juniors are 16-17, Seniors are 17-18. Your character may be a year or two older from flunking a grade, but please don't create a massive age gap.[/indent] [color=pink]Gender:[/color] [indent]Female, now[/indent] [color=purple]Sexuality:[/color] [indent]Demisexual [/indent] [color=white]Label:[/color] [indent]Geek, Crafter, dancer [/indent] [color=white]Occupation:[/color] [indent]works at the computer Lab after classes.[/indent] [color=white]Appearance Details[/color] [list][*][b][color=white]Hair: Black with light purple highlights [/color][/b] [*][b][color=white]Eyes:[/color]Teal[/b] [*][b][color=white]Height:[/color]5' 9" [/b] [*][b][color=white]Body Type:[/color]Average[/b] [*][b]Clothing Style:[/b] [/list] [indent]So She'd have the standard girls uniform and tie, though the tie would be more lose fitting. and on days where it's not to hot she'd also be wearing tights to coordinate with the uniform, and a has a few different shoe styles. Also it's quite common for her to have hair ties or a hair band in the school colors. and since she can't put the pins on her uniform, she's got a lanyard for that she'll sometimes wear that is full of pins with various anime and video game characters and logo's on it, the pins to change every so often but one that's always on there is one of a calico cat with pastel pink and blue spots as it has special meaning to her. When no in uniform She's usually in a dress or skirt set. and colorful cutesy patterns, or even Sweet or strawberry Lolita style, or if she's more lazy it'll be some anime or video game shirt with a long skirt. The closest you'll ever see her in pants, would be when she wears leggings and she has a bunch with cutesy designs on them. but they don't get near as much use. [/indent] [list] [*][color=pink][b]Makeup Wise:[/b][/color]She doesn't often wear it, but more because she hasn't had a chance to learn it, she trying to fix that [*][color=purple][b]Scars, Tattoos and/or Piercings:[/b][/color] She has her ears Pierced [/list] [color=purple]Personality[/color] [indent] [list] [*] INFP& INTP; Introvert, Intutive, (Feeling and Thinking) , Prospecting. she scored high on the I,N,P parts but was right on the line for F and T [*] She is Friendly and is trying to be outgoing though how much depends on how comfortable she is in the group and area. And being in a room of people she's never talked to before does make her nervous. That said she loves to meet new people and hang out with those she does know. [*] if she's talking or debating about something is really interested in she can talk for hours. [*] Enjoys helping people out, when she can [*] is usaly working on several side projects. [/list] [/indent] [color=yellow]Acceptance Status: [/color] [indent]How did your student find/arrive at Edgebaston? Are the part of the student deference program, can they afford tuition, or did they get a scholarship? [/indent] They got Scholarships, and see arriving here as a chance to make a fresh start of things. [color=purple]History[/color] [indent]Is a Transfer student, when they qualified for the scholarship it enabled a lot of changes, this school being one of them She doesn't often get to much into the details of her past, though she'll admit she was Born in Minnesota and lived there all though elementary school and 6th grade, before she moved south to Florida, and lived there up until she came here. [/indent] [color=purple]Extras:[/color] [indent][list][*][color=pink][b]Luggage:[/b][/color]What did your character bring with them to Edgebaston? She brought, her computer, her Switch, a collection of stuffed animals, and a mix of Kpop and Anime posters for her room. [*][color=cyan][b]Extracurricular Activities:[/b][/color] Is your character a part of any after school programs, sports, or clubs? Dance club, anime club, and computer club. [*][color=purple]anything else such as what classes they are good at, their hobbies and interests, allergies, etc.[/color] Algebra and Science classes are the ones she's the best at. English is hit and miss, She's good at coming up with stories or with arguing a point but actually writing it down with all the grammar and other rules that seem to only apply to these English courses is where she fails hard. She's pretty good at Home Ech too, least when it comes to the practical parts. Though Gym is probably her worst class for a number of reasons. [/list] [/indent] [/hider] [/quote] A few pointers: Quite a few of the guides like Character Name / Image header etc are still on the sheet. Probably best to get rid of them. What text colour does your character use? There is no hexcode next to the FC and the sheet itself has a smorgasbord of colours. For gender: Female, Now? Care to elaborate on that slightly? It has me confusion. There is quite a few points in the sheet where it jumps from She to They, which is somewhat confusing to read. The history is far too short. As a DM I don't do those 'Don't talk about my past' histories. You can have it so that characters don't know by default, but it has to be on the sheet. Two sentences is not going to cut it I am afraid.