[@Riffus Maximus]: That contract is a bit too vague. It should be modeled on an actual mythological entity specifically, not just a vague archetype.

Additionally, her backstory's a bit of a mess. If she failed to become a police officer, it'd be a [i]lot[/i] harder then that to get into the JSDF.

[@Emeth]: As mentioned, it should be a specific type of supernatural creature, either one with a specific name or a specific type. Draw from mythology.

[@Rune_Alchemist]: Accepted.

[@vietmyke]: Feel free to ask questions!