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That's okay bud, I made some changes just let me know if I gotta make any more.
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Looking good, you can add the following at the top in case you want for the organization:

Name: What is the name of your organization?
Type: What kind of type of organization do you have? ex. Mafia, Biker Club, Street Gang etc
Essential members: List essential members (max 3)
Non-essential members: List non-essential members (unlimited)

Feel free to post your organization in the char section here: https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/190558-grand-theft-auto-v-stories/char

Then we can get started. Feel free to use the OOC thread also. Collaboration is the intention here so always good to keep communication flowing there.