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Name: Hamazasp Sulser

Nickname: He registered under the callsign "Battleax Bulldog", but he's certainly open to new (and better) alternatives

[hider=Appearance:][img]https://images.evetech.net/characters/2112987026/portrait[/img][/hider]He trims his beard regularly. He always carries a smile but never shows his teeth. He throws his shoulders back and walks upright, making him appear taller than he actually is. He wears a plain T-shirt and thick slacks inside his quarters but wouldn't be caught dead outside without his overcoat. 

Age: 29 Earth years

Origin: Born and raised in the Taurian Concordat

Personality: An offensive baseliner. In social life, in combat, in romance, he won't engage before calculating a high probability of "success," or his definition of it, then storm forward with full investment. He can wait hours, days, weeks for this opportunity depending on the situation. He's quite patient and observant, though sparingly few of his friends realize it. He talks so brashly and boorishly that acquaintances dismiss him as an irrelevant triviality. Whether this is a front or a genuine aspect of his character, not even he knows himself. He has pondered that occasionally in moments of self reflection.

History: The Sulser's dairy industry, like most on Illiushin, was renowned throughout the known galaxy. As the youngest of six siblings, however, Hamazasp was impeded from higher positions of company leadership. He found solace in mech simulations. His older sister fell ill, and he assumed her duties. Misinterpreting his benevolence as a power grab, she demanded his exile when she recovered. Instead, his parents bought him the battlemech he operates to this day, bringing honor to the family business in his own unique way.

Skills: 
Gunnery: 3
Piloting: 2
Guts: 2
Tactics: 5

Abilities: Sensor Lock: Select a target within range to reveal it until end of current round and remove two of its EVASIVE charges.

Misc: Keeps a harmonica in his pocket, and plays it as the mood arises. Maintains a physical library in his cockpit, as space allows. For growing up on a world that specializes in cheeses, is oddly lactose intolerant.

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Type: Hunchback (HBK-4G), Modified (HBK-4L Brass Redemption)
Mass/Class: 50 tons, Medium-class
Armor: 6.5 tons of Starshield
Top Speed: 64 kph (40 mph)
Armaments:
	2x Autocannon/5, General Motors (yes, [i]that[/i] GM)
		2 tons of ammunition shared between both systems
	Laser (large), Krupp
	Flamer (small), Pandora
Heat Sinks: None
Quirk: 2x Jump Jets
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You know, I think this is probably a good time to address some of the things that I'm fairly certain I already mentioned, but ones that I can't stress enough. Don't think of this as a reprimand, but more of a learning experience :D

The most obvious thing here is that there is already a mech you've assigned to your MechWarrior, though I'll chalk it up as the mech bough for him by his family, according to backstory. In the RP I'll be sure to give you all [i][b]"new"[/b][/i] mechs, because I know people who are familiar with the setting are biased towards a particular few, and those who are new will likely get lost. This is to spice things up, I am sure you'll have fun learning some new mechs. (Also your mech has 0 heat sinks, apparently, which would turn it into a flaming ball after the first salvo of AC/5s.)

Going over the character, him having Sensor Lock is... well, my BattleTech obsessed brain knows that it checks out for the video game, but this part of the sheet is roughly based on the optional ruleset of [url=https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Special_Pilot_Abilities#Description_and_Summary]Special Pilot Abilities[/url], from a Time of War ruleset. They aren't based on skills; they give flavorful abilities that are unique to a pilot. That's also why earning them is an RP thing, not a number crunching thing. But if your character is already someone that relies on sensors a lot, I am sure they'll get something similar.

Finally, it's the characters that run the show. I'd appreciate slightly more detail in the personality section, and in the history a bit about HOW/WHY they became a mercenary. Especially someone from the Taurian Concordat: why did he travel alllll the way across the Inner Sphere to accept work for the Rasalhague?

This is relevant info for everyone, when you are creating your sheets. I know IC talks more loudly than OOC, but we can only rely on what we can see, and I can only judge based on what I read first. Either way, OC is coming today, so are Discord links, so make some time for yourself in the calendar :)