Do you guys think I should recreate this with a much shorter intro post? To get it moving, I could just scrap the entire backstory and instead our characters are hanging out together at the beach and a container washes up on shore holding the Scarabs. And we can take it slow and wait until we're a few posts in before the bonding happens and then take it from there. I'll probably change the Dark Ranger character around to be a teen like them if we do that.