[quote=@Salenea]
I vote for The Starless Kingdom. It is a quite an adventure, a well written and complete story in limited words, I didn't feel anything was missing besides cutting some corners. The transition from a havoc creating nuiscance, loathed by the staff to a friendly rescuer and love interest was a bit sudden, but for the length of the story it worked. 
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That is completely fair feedback. I joined the site with about a week left of the competition, and I goofed the deadline time because my mind read CST not CET lol.

I really hoped to flesh out the nuisance bit a little more, and make it more of a turning point of realizing he could drop the act and mature but I had to rush it. Even still, I was happy with it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!