[quote=@Eviledd1984]
[@CaptainManbeard]

My apologies boss. Let me just edit out that mistake.
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Well, let me ask you this: Did you read through the interest check and everything posted here? Are you sure you have a pretty good grasp on the where the story is and everything? Do you understand why they are at the Hall and the initial plot discussed over in my first post in the Interest Check? I'm worried that maybe you skimmed over a lot of it and I don't think either of us wants me to have to keep asking for edits on every post moving forward. I'm not trying to pick on you, I just do my best to avoid plot holes and make sure everyone is on the same page. 

While we're on that topic, does anyone else have any questions I can answer? Anything you're unsure of? I'm off work now, so I will be working on revamping my intro post shortly and then I'll write my new post after that.