Sorry, meeting ran long so I never got around to finishing up my post. So many things are happening concurrently within the story that I'm trying to find the best way to lay them out chronologically in my post. For instance, Supergirl is charging Metallo-Bot with the pillar at the same time Superboy charges him and uses freeze breath, so I'm working through the best way to deal with that and it's looking more and more likely that the two teens will collide with each other or something since they both rushed forward at the same enemy at the same time without coordinating their attacks or putting much thought into it LOL. If Supergirl is swinging around this giant pillar like a baseball bat and then Superboy rushes the same villain she's attempting to hit, she is liable to hit him instead, which would prevent him from having the chance to use his freeze breath and thus create a plothole. If Metallo-Bot dodges the pillar swing then he is not there anymore for Superboy to use his freeze breath, thus also creating a plothole. I'm still working out the best way to write the scene and am getting pretty sleepy, so I'm gonna go to bed and return to it tomorrow.