[@Qia ] Ah, the classic magical girl. I was wondering if we'd get any of these. :) Sadly, there are a few issues with your current character sheet, and I'll break the points down to make it easy to address: 1. Your CS isn't using the full, provided CS template, as your character's name isn't listed above her age. 2. Your character seems to actually like or enjoy her costume, which is a direct contradiction to the setting of the RP. As characters are meant to either find their outfits embarrassing, awkward or would just prefer not to have to parade around in it. You don't have to despise or hate your costume, but it shouldn't be something you're "excited" about either. 3. You have too many powers in your ability-list. You'd need to decide between Celestial Affinity, Celestial Resonance or Moonbeam Barrage. They're all fine, but at the very start of the RP you may only pick one custom skill/power/passive, so you'd need to choose one of them, you can't get 'em all. Other than those points, there are no issues with your character. Let me know if you edit your current post so I can look it over again, or re-post your character sheet once you've updated it. [b][h2]EDIT:[/h2][/b] Oh, I forgot! This isn't actually a point you need to edit so much as I need to clarify it. The [b]Imagery[/b]-part is meant to merely tell the reader what your character's costume focuses on thematically. In your case, it'd be something like "stars & space" or "astrology" or "magic girl & the moon/stars".