[@Qia]
Ah, yes. Much better.

However.
[quote=Xaltwind]
[h2][b]EDIT:[/b][/h2]


Oh, I forgot! This isn't actually a point you need to edit so much as I need to clarify it.

The Imagery-part is meant to merely tell the reader what your character's costume focuses on thematically. In your case, it'd be something like "stars & space" or "astrology" or "magic girl & the moon/stars".[/quote]
Basically, your [b]Imagery[/b] is meant to just be your general theme. That way, I know what extra/additional skills or abilities to give your costume as your character grows, keeping them in line with your overall idea/concept. :)

Once you've done that, I'll be happy to approve of Aria.