[@Abstract Proxy] Good start! Looking forward to reading the whole thing when it's done!

[@Expendable] You've written an interesting character, but I fail to see how it makes Blackguard material. How would it present any threat to the kingdom? A common criminal or drunkard wouldn't end up in the Maw.

[@Zapdos] Cool idea! There's no real system for magic, but I imagine it could work a bit like it does in DnD. Is that in any way helpful?