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[@Silverwind Blade]: Okay, the two main things that stick out to me immediately are the fact the tech company is directly from UC Gundam you should change the name, and similarly to the first bio on this list it's the mecha waaay too obviously from a pre-existing property. At least scrubbing the big Gundam logo off and changing the color would go a long way.
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I can certainly change the name; I left it the same as a homage, as my line of thinking was that this is (obviously) a separate setting from UC Gundam, so just borrowing the name would be a bit of fun. But I can change it. 

Obviously, it's a lot harder to change the colour image of the mecha itself. I don't have the skills to edit it myself. 
I can use the line art versions that don't show the markings and colours, and then add into the appearance what the colour scheme is, if that's better? 

Short of that, I'd have to find something else to use that I like as much, and TBH, the Gundam aesthetic is my preferred one, especially the S-Gundam. And Gundam [i]was[/i] mentioned specifically as one of the inspirations for this setting, so I thought it was a fairly safe bet.

If we aren't supposed to use mecha from pre-existing properties, that should probably be made clear. 
It does also limit a lot of the mecha that can be used. Though it's not like this is going to ring any alarm bells with any corporate interests. 
I've rewritten the entire backstory of the mecha as it is, and changed a lot of its' features and abilities from Gundam Sentinel, called it something different (but still a homage) and so on, in order to distance it from its' origin. 
About the only thing that [i]is[/i] the same is the appearance, and the weapons fit is vaguely the same, though without UC Gundam's terminology and background. 
I'd look past the appearance, since we're going to be playing via text, and what it represents and can do narratively is a lot more important than how it looks. I just chose it because it looks cool and it's a personal favourite, and because everyone else had chosen things that look completely different from one another. There isn't exactly a coherent aesthetic at play here.

If that's not enough combined with the change of colour/art, I'll reluctantly find something else. 

EDIT: Changed the corporation name, and the images used for the mecha to lineart. Added a completely different colour scheme in the description.