[@Eviledd1984]

A few things:

1. You forgot to include Okayasu's [b][i]Perception[/i][/b] in his [b]Pirate Parameters[/b].

2. His Martial Arts, how well can he [i]cut[/i] things with his hands? Can they substitute a full-on sword or other slashing/cutting weapon? And if he already has swordmanship at a level where he can cut almost anything, what is ht purpose of having learned this particular form of fighting-style?

3. Speaking of his swordsmanship, please elaborate a bit more about in his history, as well on his master(s). Who they were and why they know the skills/techniques they do, and why they decided to take in a thieving street-urchin and teach him their rather impressive skills.

4. I'd like to know, in your history, wht Okayasu, and the man he wants vengeance on, came all the way from Umitoshi (in the far east) to the waters in the far west. Granted, this is partly my fault for not explicitly stating where in the world Prawncourt is located to begin wtih.

5. It seems you forgot something else, please have a look through the [b]Rules[/b] again.

Once these points have been addressed, let me know and I'll go over your CS again. :)