[@LongSwordMain] Aw, she looks like a cute lass. [i][b]But[/b][/i], you seem to have forgotten some things from the CS template. I urge you to look through it again. Especially in the [b]Appearance[/b] and [b]Pirate Parameters[/b]-parts [@Expendable] The Prince has [i][b]very[/b][/i] high stats, like, really high. And some of the stats don't make much sense, considering his background and life-style. Considering he ca't figure out that his own cabin boy is a female, I'm surprised his Wits and his Perception aren't way lower. Also, he doesn't seem to have gone through any rigorous training or had a particularly hard life, so his Strength being as high as it is also doesn't make much sense. [i]However[/i], if those are the stats you want, then that's fine. I'm just giving you my opinion on them as the GM. As for your skills, I'd prefer it if you actually used real descriptions to detail how wlel he does what, rather than a numeric-system which I have no idea how to, or knowledge of, to properly measure. The Cabin "Boy" has a lot of history and drama, but a lot of it is very vague and seems to assume the reader [i]knows[/i] the name-dropped characters, places and titles of the things and people mentioned... Which is fine, but it feels a bit like starting to read a book at the very middle and having names and locations thrown at you, without any prior info about them. Both characters are otherwise fully acceptable, but again, I'd like it if you edited the Skills-part of both of them first.