[quote=@Xaltwind]	
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The Prince has [i][b]very[/b][/i] high stats, like, really high. And some of the stats don't make much sense, considering his background and life-style. Considering he ca't figure out that his own cabin boy is a female, I'm surprised his Wits and his Perception aren't way lower. Also, he doesn't seem to have gone through any rigorous training or had a particularly hard life, so his Strength being as high as it is also doesn't make much sense.

[i]However[/i], if those are the stats you want, then that's fine. I'm just giving you my opinion on them as the GM.

As for your skills, I'd prefer it if you actually used real descriptions to detail how well he does what, rather than a numeric-system which I have no idea how to, or knowledge of, to properly measure.

The Cabin "Boy" has a lot of history and drama, but a lot of it is very vague and seems to assume the reader [i]knows[/i] the name-dropped characters, places and titles of the things and people mentioned... Which is fine, but it feels a bit like starting to read a book at the very middle and having names and locations thrown at you, without any prior info about them.

Both characters are otherwise fully acceptable, but again, I'd like it if you edited the Skills-part of both of them first.
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First paragraph establishes his extensive training, but I've no problem dumbing down Prince Dunderhead further. [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/5478015]Are these stats and skill descriptions more to your liking?[/url] I'm using your pirate parameters scale to give a quick read of their skill levels - a B in navigation, for example.

And really it's not entirely his fault for not realizing Aywin's a girl. She was mal-nourished from prison, and food aboard navy ships isn't that much better, honestly. Lots of protein and some carbs, good for muscle mass but little else. And I do mean little. Despite her age and thanks to her elven blood, she looks like a skinny, underdeveloped teenager. 

As far as titles go, a marquis is a high ranking noble, just below a duke. Aywin's uncle, the judge, is a government official who works under him, top third. Or at least did.

Sorry about the names. Aywin ought to know her family. Really they're hooks for future information.

As far as the rest go, sorry it's vague but I'm just putting in the basic important details, they're story hooks for later. Like if the captain goes digging through the cabin boy's sea bag and finds her medal. I know it's tied to the blockade of Mylmashys and the fireships, something the captain might have heard of.