[quote=@Goose] Yes! Please go right ahead. I really like the concept and writing style, but I’m going to have to [u]approve conditionally[/u] based on a small discrepancy in tone here: I don’t want the father calling the son insults. I understand that it’s a real and prevalent social issue irl and can understand wanting to include that family friction, but it does break the No Profanity rule. Feel free to change the wording (eg. dad wanted to “raise a son”), or to remove it and let the friction with dad be implied. [/quote] I think I fixed it. I doubt Niko’s dad is going to show up much tbh. Also, do I go with Pokeblocks or Poffins?