[quote=@Xaltwind] I did forget to mention a few things in her wishes/regrets-bit though, and I didn't get all the bits and pieces about her bullying/everyday life in. But I can always edit those in... Well, at least the wishes/regret part. [/quote] It'd be impossible to get every aspect of our characters' previous sufferings in life into a single intro post. If Dalton comes off as creepy and awkward now, just wait til he starts having flashbacks or making comparisons between his new life and old one, lol.