[@Emeth] Alright! I've had a look and here's the breakdown.

1. This is a wonderfully well-written CS, with attention to detail, nuance, and internal stakes for the character. Thanks for spelling. And grammar.

2. Even though it's crept a bit towards the higher-fantasy echelons in recent months, THO is still fundamentally rooted in plausibility, so naturally pink hair for a human is a no-no. That either needs to change or be a dye job via magic or some other means.

3. FWIW, I don't find it too angsty. There's a lot of negative history, but it feels... coherent, for lack of a better word.

4. Maybe make her from Méattu or Revidia? 

5. An entire magic school simply being destroyed would be a pretty major world event. Maybe we're looking at a very small pre-academy prep centre or maybe not literally destroyed to the point of ruins? I imagine there's a good reason for this, attached to her wandering and ill-fortune, but magic academies don't just get destroyed on Sipenta.

6. The items are cool, but maybe a [i]bit[/i] overpowered. I understand that they're a callback to her Gift from Harold's, however, and they sneakily make it work. Given that she doesn't skew that strong otherwise and they allow her to play similarly to before, I'm going to handwave what would otherwise be concerns and grandfather her in. I trust I can count on you not to abuse those mechanics.

7. Small thing: flying fluidly with tier 2 in Kinetic Magic is pretty iffy. Levitate + other motion-related stuff can [i]kinda[/i] do it, but Wings of Magic, in tier 3, is where it really becomes viable.

8. Most of my concerns are just products of the nature of transposing a character between completely different magical settings and a couple others are nitpicky, but I'm wary of slippery slope. Let's address those and then, by and large, I'm genuinely excited for Raffy in THO and look forward to seeing her!