[@Arista]

So, as you'll see, I did add more than what I'd ran by you in the PMs. I also plugged in a name for the world. Let me know if you're okay with the additions! If you aren't okay with something that I put, just let me know.

And, er, I apologize if it needs more editing to be easier to understand. I wanted to get this up here, but it's about four in the morning where I am, and I should probably get ready for bed. I'll try to get my character profile up tomorrow! Er... later today.