[quote=@Eobard Thawne] [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/12e1_VYhnA9LOd9aNtHK-qpH6zU2AwRkAB5jUn1MriIE/edit?usp=drivesdk]Hatake Ikuya[/url] Forgive me, Master, I prefer the GDocs view since it's easier to write, I may also paste the sheet with the format you've given when the time comes. [/quote] Works for me. On a "quick" review of some aspects of your CS: As far as I'm aware, there's no Trope related to the Hatake having a "situational ability to quickly think & strategize on the fly to reverse the predicament in their favor, no matter how cruel & unfair the action is". That's really not a thing. It also doesn't really capture the feel of a Trope and would (if it were a thing) be better placed in Bloodline. What you're describing isn't really unique to the Hatake either; that's literally just a trait of any skilled ninja, so I'd axe that. Similarly with this: "Canine Sign Language Some Hatake are trained to tame Wolves, Dogs & all sorts of canine breeds with Canine Sign Language. (soon to have)". Doesn't read like a Trope. This would go under bloodline or skills, if anything. Overall, what you've described aren't really tropes. What I would describe as an actual trope is something like: The Dog-ged Hatake Clan: The embodiment of the misconception that Kakashi largely reflects traits shared by the rest of his clan, Ikuya finds himself born into what he may soon realize is a... "tweaked" Hatake Clan, who display not just distinctly hereditary silver hair but a close connection -or at least comparison- to the Inazuka and dogs, specifically through the possession of the Dog Summoning Contract, through which summons they learn many canine-like techniques. I would say as far as your overall concept, what the Hatake would be is essentially "knock off Inazuka". If anything, the Inazuka would be almost hostile to them for "stealing their schtick" and having the dog contract where they don't. The Hatake wouldn't have their own equivalent of ninken. What they *have* is dog *summons*, which allow a few of their members to encroach on the Inazuka's "thing" and learn techniques from the summons that let them mimic (for one) the Inazuka's tracking/sensory capabilities. I'm coming at this partially with the perspective of not wanting to take away from the Inazuka's uniqueness, regardless of viability. The clans would be reasonably extremely stingy over their jutsu being stolen, so ninken of any kind would be a very closely hoarded resource, and the Inazuka most likely have them (for lack of a better word) "trademarked" such that any form of ninken is their Clan's property. [quote=@Landaus Five-One] Kaneme Haruno WIP [/quote] Love the FC you've chosen here, and the sections you've filled in look fine so far. :) I don't have much more to say for now, as I know you have stuff keeping you busy. No rush on completion for now. [quote=@Gerlando] Yumiya Fuma WIP [/quote] Good stuff! I don't see anything wrong with what you've got so far. Only thing I'd poke is the physical description so far, but i'm sure the eventual FC will largely cover for any lacking there. [quote=@Randomguy] Yuki Akane WIP [/quote] Overall, the sheet looks great so far. I waffled a bit on allowing the Kiri lore you're laying down with your arrival premise, but since this is a fanon corrupted universe, Dark!er and Edgier is very much on the table. So, congrats, bloodline internment camps are now a thing in this universe where they wouldn't have been. I hope you're proud of yourself. XD