[quote=@Mintz] Okay, so...There isn't anything [i]inherently[/i] wrong with Rhylaen, but me and Kaya both agree that she feels pretty disconnected from, like, anything relating to the Marvel-verse, which makes it stand out like a sore thumb. Just feels off to have an entire race and world and universe separate from our current one with quite literally nothing connecting them beyond these apparent wraiths that sent her here. In essence, we'd prefer something with more ties to the Marvel-verse at large. Likin' the look of this one! Only two complaints, one much more minor than the other; firstly, I ask that they not be [i]too[/i] proficient with the sling ring, because, well...I want an excuse to get y'all into cool Quinjets [s]that will inevitably crash and burn[/s]! Can't do that if we have an instant portal service around lol The second one is more major, though. The Sleep Magic, as it is written right now, is too strong. Effectively, it says that even with its lightest version, it can incapacitate most human combatants for around 5 minutes. Now, of course, this may interact differently with certain super-powered individuals, but for the most part it's just a button that can instantly end most combat scenarios, which is not a fun thing for me to have to write around. I'm open to hearing about other options or retooling this power! If these issues can be addressed, we'll be more than happy accepting Valerian. ...Oh, also, as a personal request from our dear Co-GM Kaya, [i]please[/i] don't use that shade of white for his color. It's very hard to parse from the standard white of the text, so it doesn't do its main purpose of standing out from the non-verbal texts. [/quote] Oh the sling ring proficiency is totally doable! He's still a baby sorcerer at the moment and right now he's busy focusing how to open a portal first. For the sleep magic, I was thinking maybe he can still make his target sleep but he'll also fall asleep too or his sleep magic would have to take a long time to conjure and fully activate so he'll be vulnerable to attacks. Still, this is just an additional thingy he has and I'm a-okay removing it from his powerset. Also yeah, I'll go and pick out another shade of color. No biggie! XD