[quote=@anothered]
[@CleverFox][@Expendable]

They chose to close the thread rather than continue with you two, haha.

I literally made a clear path for both of your characters to leave the ship and explore the moon but you both chose to confine them to separate parts of the ship. You both wrote some posts but none of them effected the story at all... one women is still walking around with a chip on her shoulder and the other is still thinking about food. You're supposed to be participating in a story, would you read a book or watch a show about a cynical security guard and a hungry pilot who don't interact with each other? You've practically made two static NPCs.

[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=StESLTnGyHM]Here's[/url] a video about improv.
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And this is how [i]you[/i] chose to interact with others.