[quote=@Visyn]
Ahh! Perfect! Sorry I had to have you bring the info sooner, but it greatly helped, and I've aligned my character ironically enough to what you have haha.

Thank you so much. 
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Glad to to help

[quote=@Visyn]
[@Mas Bagus]

Okie! Here's the CS for review. The bio isn't that long and I apologize. Lemme know if i need to change anything


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[b]Name[/b]: Roxas

[b]Species[/b]: Elf

[b]Age[/b]: 173

[b]Gender[/b]: Female

[b]Outfit[/b]: Usually wears trousers, tunic, belt and capelet for easier travel.

[b]Passives[/b]: 
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[*] Longbow: Has been trained to create, and shoot her own longbow; is considered a marksmen with it.
[*] Shortsword: Knows how to wield and properly care for a shortsword.
[*] Avians: Has an natural affinity to befriend most birds.
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[b]Spells[/b]: 
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[*] Renew: A spell of light to heal minor injuries. It takes few seconds to cast and heals near instant.
[*] Barrier: A spell to create a dome for defensive means. It depletes mana fast, so used as a last resort or in dire circumstances.
[*] Marksman: A buff to hone in on a target and make her arrows hit them without fail. Limited to sight or cover.
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[b]Mundane Skills[/b]: 
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[*] Cooking: Can cook most elven and human dishes. Food is described as better than most.
[*] Medical: Knowns some basic medical procedures like wrapping up wounds or even sewing them up if needed. Can create basic salves to help with pain.
[*] Survival: Has most survival skills; building a fire, a small hut, tracking, figuring out North, etc.
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[b]Equipment[/b]: 
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[*] Longbow: her own creation, well loved. A beautiful white wood with carved intricacies. Arrows for said bow are either created or bought. 
[*] Quiver: Her quiver is a darker genuine leather, that rests at her hip and holds her arrows, has a few inner sections to keep certain arrows away from each other; poison, radiant, etc.
[*] Shortsword: bought it from a vendor; it is high quality steel and expertly made. It usually sits at the small or her back.
[*] Bag: carries a small pack that holds all her every day travel items; rations, tools, medical items, etc. Carries an dagger incase her shortsword is no longer a means.
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[b]Bio[/b]: 
Roxas lived in Alkaustar until she turned around 100. After that, she grew a little tired of the mundane and repetitive life. She wanted to see more of the world. She wandered around, until she saw Vesemir Barandir's pamphlet. Into the Land of the Twilight, the land that once belonged to her people. She didn't know exactly her elven creation, but she knew it was.. big. Perhaps going to Nuria will tell her more about her heritage. Her curiosity became piqued and she made her way to where recruits for the journey would gather.

[b]Other[/b]: Finds peace in music; as thus, she leaned to play the flute; to the degree of making her own to play.


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There is a merit in being simple and straightforward and I like that, though if I am allowed to say, she seems a bit too underpowered, no?
As far as the administration is concerned, all looks good. Narratively, looks good too, and workable. I am sure we can get to now her a lot better in OOC and IC.  

My flagship character is a female elf too, but she is thrice younger than her. An archer too... but her theme is the opposite of Roxas'. 



[@Randomguy][@Visyn][@Vlad Tepes][@Valkon]
I think now is the good time to open the invitation to the discord server, though the RP could use two more players before I can start writing the OOC/IC thread, it wouldn't hurt to have a place for a quick OOC madness in discord. Also, it is painful for me to open the forum on my mobile phone, let alone make a post.

https://discord.gg/AdUtWk4Nqn